Hi. My name is Frank. There's something terrible that happened to my dune buggy. (The buggy I rode in that dune buggy race.) But any way, the remaining ingredients that caused the terrible dune buggy thingy was a buggy crash, a broken engine-and-exhaust system, fire, and a huge explosion. Hint: you might now what happened, so I'll put the answer in small letters so you can't read it. (A:My buggy exploded.). So, anyway, I'll tell you what happened. Today was Saturday, and we made up a race. Everyone watched from the side fence. Cars gathered up without driving. (And you know cars can't drive cars, but this is a fiction book; anyway; btw) "On your marks..." said Security. "get set..." "Go!!!" We sped off the street. (The cars aren't driving around today; btw; for the race;) First we drove through Car Island, then around Car Island, then back. Things didn't go all that seriously because I didn't win the race. I'll explain it to you. When racing through Car Island, I accidentally pushed a dune buggy hard and overtook it. A few minutes later, it was a dead heat. I went too fast; I wanted to be the 1st one to reach the next race but I crashed into buggy. The crash caused 960% of fuel loss, one disconnected alarm in one buggy, a hot wired engine in another, and burning fire in the buggy engines. (That looks like a job for--- fire engines!) And kaboom to go; an one-hundred-and-eighty degree explosion (a very big explosion). The cars weren't killed; but the road was ruined and me and Aron's buggy's were broken down. But anyway, a road paving machine fixed the road in a hurry, and my Grandpa Ed built us new buggy's; anyway.
Later that day, me and Andy decided to have a talk with it. "Gee, I guess I shouldn't go obsessing about winning the race. Right, Andy?" I said. "Yep." said Andy. "Like the old saying always says: ' " Don't go obsessing about winning a race like Lightning McQueen.' "
Epilogue: That evening, Car Island International News (CIIN) reported two exploded dune buggys.
Epilogue 2: The crowd booed at the exploded dune buggys.
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The Exploded Car was based on an event that really happened. When my dad was driving me to school, we saw thick black smoke. And we found out it was an exploded car!
(Listen. I'm a 6 year old writer. Okay?)
Hey Tony. Can you post a comment on every book I right if you can, please?
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