The Invention Show

I made a Squish-a-Tron 2000 with help from my dad (hes an inventor). It was a machine that squashed things. Things didn't go good, so Fred Buckley won 1st place. After assembling the C2900096 Biocapacitating versifier, the X34518926 Mechanic Chip, Squashie Squishie 100% Squashers, and a blast of motor oil in the oil tank, the Squish-a-Tron 2000 was ready. Oh, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Frank and I am 6 years old. The next day, I was getting ready. "You think you can make it?" said Andy. (Cars don't need seats and they need ramps.) Well, this is what didn't go good. Please don't laugh okay? During 11:30am, the time when the show started, me and Andy were the first ones up. Andy said "I'd like to present an invention my friend, Frank, made with his dads help. The Squish-a-Tron 2000! I placed 2 apples on the glass screen of the machine and pressed 'Start'. Suddenly, squishers came out from small tubes. They began squishing and squashing the apples until applesauce fell on the children. SPLAT! SPLAT! SPLAT! The children howled with laughter. "It isn't funny!" said Fred. Fred was the next up. He showed his Gear-O-Matic 4000 to the audience. Everyone was amazed. And for some reason, he won 1st place. Epilogue: I added (cars do not need seats or ramps) because Frank and Andy were talking on the school bus.